Blood Modification Poem by Dora Flood

Blood Modification



By Dora Flood

I read alot
About 'cutting' and how it
Makes you feel better
I like to run my tongue across the
Scars they leave
Moist then wetter
To approximate the pain
I'll sometimes squeeze my left nipple
But nothing can substitute
When it starts to flow and ripple

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dora Flood 04 June 2010

Literary device isn't a requisite when writing prose.It doesn't have to entertain. A Tupac movie it ain't. Stick to the cartoon network girlie, your out of your depth.

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Leviathan's Playground 04 June 2010

Excuse me but I don't understand your meaning. you use no literary devices, no entertainment value and it is just purely a waste of time. Please write another poem of higher quality.

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