i swim in the blood red waves,
not noticing the monster deep within,
i float on the blood red waves,
while the monster comes closer,
I'm sinking in the blood red waves
i know it's not about suicide, but i can also understand how it would seem like that again, exceptional
hey i no im not sposed 2 write comments on my own poems but i dont fell like messengerin evry1 bout this poem. Its NOT ABOUT SUICIDE its about heart attacks (sort of) and how they can spring up on u quite suddenly. SO PLZ NO MORE COMMENTS ON SUICIDE! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It didnt come off as suicide at all, seemed to me that you was planning a mass murder to be honest