Luke Weinberg

Rookie (May 29th 1996 / New York)

Bluey Sky - Poem by Luke Weinberg

i'm standing here alone
wondering who i am
i never thought that i would be a dead man
i can't help but feel the pain
feel the pain of others around me
but now i must survive, that's my plan
i look up at that Bluey sky
where the heavens are up so high
i think to myself everything is ok, no that's a lie
so i sit, i start to cry
i wish there was no more war
and so i start to cry some more
as i slowly pass, i'm somewhere with my family and we're happy
but now i know where i am
so i look down at that Bluey sky
and i am in the heavens, where i'm up so high


Comments about Bluey Sky by Luke Weinberg

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (5/11/2011 5:43:00 PM)

    A very well crafted and poignant write which shows your great talent to make through the Poetry's World! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011


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