Bon Jour Mon Dieu Poem by Aldo Kraas

Bon Jour Mon Dieu



Bon jour mon dieu
Today you are going
From door to door
To wake up the people
In a Somalian vilage

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 10 July 2014

I wish you had continued and added more to this piece. For example, why not add more by telling the reader why you are going to door to door to wake up the people of this Soamlian village? Details please!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 10 September 2009

how did you know? ..........

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