Treasure Island

Fiona Davidson

(From beyond time)

Bonfires of Desire


Love washes over me
Bliss follows in its steps
Curling around my soul
Just a trace of a kiss
Lingers on my lips
Burning like a spark
Blown from bonfires
Dreams settled upon it
The map of my skin
Tingles with your touch
Heart races faster now
Trying to keep up
With the passion that flows
Beneath my surface
Like a crystal river of desire
I rest on your shoulder now
Sated as we lie as one
Entangled hearts beat so soft
Eternity could call unheard

Submitted: Thursday, August 13, 2009
Edited: Thursday, August 13, 2009

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  • Matt Mooney (4/16/2010 3:50:00 PM)

    'Eternity could call unheard'-wonderful. A great poem of love.You once enjoyed my 'Montmartre'. (Report) Reply

  • Barbara Terry (3/29/2010 2:27:00 PM)

    I wish upon a star that I could have a love like you write aobut here. This is so tender and romantic it just makes the heart melt. Thank you Fi for sharing this delightful poem.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara (Report) Reply

  • Stephen Stirk (8/27/2009 1:30:00 PM)

    Wonderful stuff Fi. Gives a whole new meaning to November the 5th. Bangers, rockets and the like. A definite 15 out of 10.
    Best Regards
    Steve (Report) Reply

  • Stephen Magill (8/19/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    curled toes and body spasms have never been peened so eloquently. loved the ending, eternity could call unheard. -steve (Report) Reply

  • Sue Sie (8/14/2009 8:28:00 AM)

    Talent of writing Romance is surely your Forte...excellent content...Fiery passion of desire..with the gentleness of loving heart x
    Sue (Report) Reply

  • Carl Harris (8/13/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    The wonderful sensuality of this charming and very expressive poem is quite delightful, Fi. You simply excell like virtually no other poet in writing these lovely romantic poems. Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (8/13/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    Bonfires of Desire is a beautiful poem of both passion and tenderness...well done as usual Fi...10+ (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (8/13/2009 3:55:00 AM)

    Fi this breathes passion and reads so very well - I love the final line in which 'eternity could call unheard' - - a tender and warm poem right through..... xx Fay (Report) Reply

  • Nikunj Sharma (8/13/2009 3:47:00 AM)

    eternity shall go unheard

    for the time acquired a new dimension

    seconds dont want to move

    minutes no longer are in procession

    the time, the moment and the spur

    Captured, captivated like slave

    i lived a lifetime, in the single moment you gave....

    Pls read magnets, which is incidently in top 500 poems. (Report) Reply

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