Bonfires Of Desire Poem by Fiona Davidson

Bonfires Of Desire



Love washes over me
Bliss follows in its steps
Curling around my soul
Just a trace of a kiss
Lingers on my lips
Burning like a spark
Blown from bonfires
Dreams settled upon it
The map of my skin
Tingles with your touch
Heart races faster now
Trying to keep up
With the passion that flows
Beneath my surface
Like a crystal river of desire
I rest on your shoulder now
Sated as we lie as one
Entangled hearts beat so soft
Eternity could call unheard

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 13 August 2009

eternity shall go unheard for the time acquired a new dimension seconds dont want to move minutes no longer are in procession the time, the moment and the spur Captured, captivated like slave i lived a lifetime, in the single moment you gave.... Pls read magnets, which is incidently in top 500 poems.

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Fay Slimm 13 August 2009

Fi this breathes passion and reads so very well - I love the final line in which 'eternity could call unheard' - - a tender and warm poem right through..... xx Fay

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Sandra Martyres 13 August 2009

Bonfires of Desire is a beautiful poem of both passion and tenderness...well done as usual Fi...10+

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Herbert Nehrlich2 13 August 2009

This surely must be an 11. Excellent and the perfect mix of soft and tender and fiery passion. Hx

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Carol Gall 13 August 2009

wow fi just wow.../......

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Premila Patel 30 May 2015

I couldn't help adding another... shout it from the rooftops. Louder than the bonfires.. Its bigger and better! ! xx

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Premila Patel 18 May 2015

You can only hope for the best Fiona... there's always more to come... xx

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Matt Mooney 16 April 2010

'Eternity could call unheard'-wonderful. A great poem of love.You once enjoyed my 'Montmartre'.

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Barbara Terry 29 March 2010

I wish upon a star that I could have a love like you write aobut here. This is so tender and romantic it just makes the heart melt. Thank you Fi for sharing this delightful poem. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

Sated as we lie as one Rachel Ann Butler

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