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Barbara Terry (3/29/2010 2:24:00 PM)
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Beautiful, heartfelt, romantic, and happy. These are the emotions I get from reading this. If only we could have a love that would stay with us 'one more day'. Thank you Fi for sharing.
Love & hugs,
Barbara
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Barbara Terry (6/29/2009 1:15:00 PM)
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OH this is just beautiful Fi. A very romantic piece from the heart. I love how you use the stars and the sun and moon to create a heart melting romantic atmosphere. Simply gorgeous. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing.
Love & hugs,
Barbara
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Chuck Audette (6/10/2009 2:30:00 PM)
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Lovely, contains the vastness of the universe of the heart in one smallish poem. -chuck
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Randy Hogan (6/1/2009 5:19:00 PM)
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Beautiful write.....
What is time to man
but just a moment
For man is made of the star,
no dust he ask
for your beauty is truly special
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Jack Price (6/1/2009 12:45:00 PM)
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Nobody does it better! As a man, you really could use this poem as an example of what you would do for your lady in order to keep her. You seem to be sharing some secrets and giving the fellas some advice at the same time. I love this poem! I wish I could have written it. (smile) On the serious side, I am just so greatful for your work and what you bring to this site. You show us all and many of your fans and supporters how a love poem should be written. My best to you always Fi! Always looking forward to read and digest your work. God bless J. L.
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Lady Grace (5/30/2009 3:24:00 AM)
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full of emotion.full of love..grace
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. . (5/28/2009 9:28:00 PM)
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This flooded my heart and brought me to tears. I was caught up in your words naturally. Beautiful. I look forward to more.
Peace.
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Ken E Hall (5/13/2009 4:35:00 AM)
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Love is the center to our being and you have expressed it vividly...luvli +++10
regards
uavanice1
PS and thanks
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