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Elizabeth Fontaine Grieco

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Elizabeth Fontaine Grieco

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

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Suck me into your bottle
Spit me out as you wish
Leaving a sour taste upon my lips
After expounding for the day
Leaves one to wonder?
Does he love me as he says?

Elizabeth Fontaine Grieco

Friday, May 4, 2012

Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts

poem poems Leaving Lips leaves

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Written on Aug 16,2009 at the kitchen table, after an argument with my fiance. Love is sometimes hard to take, because it depends what kind of mood your loved one is in.

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Robert Burns 13 May 2012

Elizabeth Fontaine Grieco, I can see one spitting into a bottle, but sucking - no. Spitting, out - O.K. And leaving a sour taste on your lips - is O.K. too. But leaves one to wonder if he loves, works for me only if the bottle are his LIPS! ROBERT BURNS, PORTLAND, OREGON

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