Bottleneck Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Bottleneck

Rating: 5.0


Her rare astonishing love
It's like Braille alphabet.
You have to touch the raised dots and understand.
But caressing is prohibited since a long time.
Then how can he trace this fragile creature?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Johnson 29 March 2006

A very original hymn to touch. Susie.

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Sandra Fowler 26 March 2006

Extraordinary imagery. An intense mood well sustained. Very original and lovely, Nimal. Regards, Sandra

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Theresa Rayman 25 March 2006

Wonderful poem, nimal. As usual you have crafted this with amazing imagery, painting a detailed picture in a few short yet beautiful lines. I love the title too! Blessings to you! -TGR (Theresa)

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Duncan Wyllie 25 March 2006

Loads of feeling in this.Something very fragile and beautiful within your words.So worth reading.Thankyou.Love Duncan

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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