who claims immortality?
ill crush them with my bare hands
who claims to live forever?
ill end their existence with ease
everyone will perish
its only a matter of time
who claims to be invincible?
ill eat them alive with hunger
who claims to be indestructible?
i will destroy them with pleasure
live while you have the chance
time may not end, but you will expire
then i will take you to dance,
dance in purgatory,
you will be judged
saved by the light,
or banished into darkness
believe....
A well matured thought for the young poet. Well written
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Many poems are written along these lines, though most that I read fall short of this skill level; a 10 in my book.