Flecks of joy flick through bounty of beauty
blessing slips over grin sparking over stone
as moonlit flits across the darkness of door
soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons
yet not divine but from a true heart unknown
graces of beauty yet trudges through barriers
verdant green and blue dusts all when similar
as sizzles of rain reels through the dusty summer
love moves faster all across sky azure in unison
all dimensions by distances slowly blur in blue
space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream
tranquility finds truth of reason yet unobtrusive
mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual
depth of silence slowly precipitates over rune of shadow
yet time and space even differs by creed of variety
knowingly unknown riffles resolute from crowd within
flecks of joy and depth of silence whaaaaa wonderful adjectives used a straight tenner from me anjali
Your poem walks majestically with awesome imagery and the choicest diction. But 'we have given our hearts away a sordid boon'. CP
you are so good at capturing emotions with your words.bounty of beauty is what i felt after reading this10 from me
A good work with emotions and imagery Doc.Enjoyed reading it
‘soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons’ And Tall yeah ‘Eternity and Soul Are in symbiotic orchestration In the backdropp of Time [eon] infinitum.’ ~ niv Fodder and solace to Soul Vedantic Valor …metaphor mapped to reach destination 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.
love moves faster all across sky azure in unison all dimensions by distances slowly blur in blue space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream 10
mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual depth of silence slowly precipitates over rune of shadow Rachel Ann Butler
nice simile: ''verdant green and blue dusts all when similar as sizzles of rain reels through the dusty summer'' The nature is governed by spiritual and intellectual powers.... Everything takes place by chance, by hazard or by fortuity. Everything that takes place according to law; because the agents of law, the agents of karma, are there to hold it firm, to prevent it from destroying indiscriminately. Destiny is held firmly in the hands of God.This poem is splendid because it explains us the beauty of nature. 10++++ from me
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your words tumble onto the page with refreshing diversity. Your images are penned in rainbows of music and color. Your sentiments cannot fail to touch even the most ignorant reader. Your bounty of beauty is rich indeed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥