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Roy Martinez
(10/16/2009 12:31:00 PM) |
love moves faster all across sky azure in unison
all dimensions by distances slowly blur in blue
space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream
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Marieta Maglas
(7/15/2009 2:39:00 PM) |
nice simile:
''verdant green and blue dusts all when similar
as sizzles of rain reels through the dusty summer''
The nature is governed by spiritual and intellectual powers.... Everything takes place by chance, by hazard or by fortuity. Everything that takes place according to law; because the agents of law, the agents of karma, are there to hold it firm, to prevent it from destroying indiscriminately. Destiny is held firmly in the hands of God.This poem is splendid because it explains us the beauty of nature.
10++++ from me
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Ritty Patnaik
(6/14/2009 1:41:00 AM) |
your poem is a real bounty of verdant nature and itsbeauty.sometimes i think poets like you are from another world!
ritty patnaik
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surya surya
(6/7/2009 2:15:00 AM) |
beautifull and poetic lines.wonderfull expression.
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surya
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Reshma Ramesh
(6/4/2009 2:25:00 PM) |
great title...........beautiful lines............
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Vidyadhar .
(6/4/2009 10:01:00 AM) |
A good work with emotions and imagery Doc.Enjoyed reading it
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Maitreyee Joshi
(6/4/2009 8:01:00 AM) |
you are so good at capturing emotions with your words.bounty of beauty is what i felt after reading this10 from me
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C. P. Sharma
(5/31/2009 1:46:00 AM) |
Your poem walks majestically with awesome imagery and the choicest diction.
But 'we have given our hearts away a sordid boon'.
CP
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