'Bout Me Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

'Bout Me

Rating: 3.5


We know each other
as a passerby
then you came to look for me
as a passerby
then you began to ask about me
as a part of your busy doing
then came that big moment
for you and me
i became part of your thoughts
unconsciously.....



© Sylvia Frances Chan
Saturday 12 November 2011 - 14.14 hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 23 June 2019

We know each other as a passerby then you came to look for me as a passerby then you began to ask about me as a part of your busy doing then came that big moment for you and me i became part of your thoughts unconsciously..... - - -Your emotions flow so sweetly in this short poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 November 2017

I became part of your thoughts unconsciously..True friendship or you may call relationship is destined! A wonderful write dear madam! Loved the sublime tone and tranquilizing influence of this magnificent piece of work…10

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 08 June 2017

Interaction of one passerby with another is deeply observed and presented in this poem. Moment of thoughts is shared within each other through appearance and vibrations. The big moment by passerby is witnessed by though of appearance. This is very thoughtful poem shared here is interesting.10

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