I bow my head to the God as well as to the earth,
To the former who has given the new birth,
Who has taught to love by gifting the youth into old body,
Who has removed the superstitions and tuned up the melody.
I bow myself to 'em politely and their blesses spread o'er my activity.
Freedom of light makes me mad and remembering 'em I do my duty.
A nice poetic imagination, Sudipta. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Sudipta, here is how I would correct the wording. I hope this is helpful. I bow my head to God as well as to the earth, To the former who has given new birth, Who has taught to love by gifting youth into old body, Who has removed superstitions and tuned up the melody. I bow myself to them politely and their blessed spread o'er my activity. Freedom of light makes me mad and remembering them I do my duty.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Who has taught to love by gifting the youth into old body, Who has removed the superstitions and tuned up the melody. Bowing before God the Almighty and thanking...... very n ice poem. i thank you for your loving heart....... which is soo grateful. tony
Thanking you for reading and commenting..