AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

Rookie (Hyderabad, AP, India)

Breezy Gal - Poem by AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

The bouncy gal breezed
into the teeming train.

the standing crowd
instantly pulled back
and lined up in two rows.

They cleared the way
and let her in
sweetly hoping
that the wind
would blow in generously
and waft her 'pallu' around
to kiss their desires.

{PALLU (a Hindi word originating from Sanskrit ‘Pallavi’) : the loose end of the Indian sari (or saree) that flows over the shoulder from across the bust line and dangles at the back.}

[Feb 19,2009: : Hyderabad – 500 056]

Comments about Breezy Gal by AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (10/14/2009 10:30:00 AM)

    a naughty write...lovely... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (10/10/2009 12:34:00 PM)

    How lovely written in this breezy way - well done. Thanks for the smile :) - Cindy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mubeen Sadhika (10/10/2009 1:31:00 AM)

    beautiful poem. nice narration. good thought. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 10, 2009

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