Bright Stars Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Bright Stars

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While i look at sky, in some clear night, it looks beautiful, i feel them talking, in codes by flickering, and asking me to come, nearby them and play, and talk with them with no fear, and join them in purity, and see the star dust from close.
i feel it more real when i remember, the words of my mother,
'' i want you to be a bright star''

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Christopher Flynn 10 July 2009

A bright night To look so high To wish upon a star And remember who you are The last line sums this poem up tne best for me. Nicely written

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'' i want you to be a bright star''..... golden words from mother very deep one and good ambition of an individual......10 read mine 'Luminous star gone and O.mother

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Lady Grace 15 June 2009

i like the simplicity of this poem..this is good and smart..grace

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Carol Gall 13 June 2009

lovely poem bright star is what you are 10

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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