Why do you wanna argue, when you
know I already feel so beaten down.
There's a cloud that surrounds me,
and it just keeps chasing me around.
Feel the snow that's falling apon
us, collecting on the ground.
Feel the chill, that seeps into
my bones... We can seek shelter
together, Why do you wanna face it
alone?
Are you gonna stand out here in this
blizzard? Or are you gonna take my hand
and bring me Home?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You have quite an individualistic voice- tell me please, is this the lyrics to a song? I find myself wanting to sing it... One way or another, you speak straight from the heart. There's a cloud that surrounds me, and it just keeps chasing me around. Feel the snow that's falling apon us, collecting on the ground.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Those are such well-chosen visuals and as such pack the honesty and the emotion you want your reader to feel. Very good write, Rebecca. A well-deserved 10!
Thank You Susan, For Making me Smile! ! ! Guess I was in kinda a bluesy mood that day. Thank You! Many Blessings! ! !