Broken Poem by Austin Ray

Broken

Rating: 5.0


She broke my heart
Tore me apart
Ripped me open
Now I'm broken
We were happy together
I thought it would last forever
I dont know what to think
I just want to sink
A gift from above
I gave her my Love
Aches and pains
It pumps through my veins
Just let me be
There is nothing else to see
There is nothing else to be

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Austin Ray 25 February 2013

Thank you very much it actually has already gotten better! I have already written a new, more happy poem. It will be up soon.

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Joshua Fegley 25 February 2013

Awesome poem dude. I wish I could say it gets better, but it's not my place, at least through my experience. Oh...and whatever you do, don't read my poetry. Cheers.

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Jaasindah Mir 25 February 2013

It is Beautiful! Congrats!

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