My heart is breaking
My body's shaking
And my lips are faking
A smile.
A lie.
With the playing
They fake.
With the words
They speak.
'I'm fine.'
Yea right.
-Out goes the ligh-
I'm in the dark.
Im my head.
How I wish I could be dead.
But OHH
All the people
I'd be leaving behind
Who would try to find
Me after death.
Who'd fallow me along.
In singing this sad song.
Of depression thats taken over...
That was sick! I like you questioning who would follow you. that was pretty sweet. all in all the poem flowed smoothly. every line was well connected in telling the story adding up to the total theme of great sadness. wonderful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hi i like your poem keep up the work