Broken Poem by Brandi Young

Broken



Last night my heart was broken,
but now it's just bruised.
I couldn't believe that what I was hearing was true.
I never that things would have gone like that.
But I was wrong

She broke my hear,
But I still love her.
I'm broken,
but I know she can fix me.
Cause she has done it before.

I thot last might I had lost her forever.
but I didn't.
Cause once she said 'I love you, and i'm never going to leave'
Well I'm glad to say she kept her word
Cause if she didn't I wouldn't be writing this.

8-12-05

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 21 July 2009

very very good. i really like the way you ended this 1.

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Eduardo Xavier 26 June 2006

After reading, I don't have that much to say.. but I'll try, very good..

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