Broken Into Pieces Poem by Honey de la Torre

Broken Into Pieces

Rating: 4.5


As I was looking straight ahead to the road
Where I supposed to land makes me shiver and
Cry hard, as for I know, that all of the hard
Works and sacrifices that I've done in my
Whole life could be paid for, cause all of
Them will turn into ashes as my body does. The
Ambition that I always dream when I'm still young
Will forever be a dream, a dream that I couldnt have.

Tuesday, December 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: tragedy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 January 2016

An insightful piece of poetry depicting deplorable state of hopelessness as life takes a turn for the worst. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction from the heart with conviction. Whenever one's life makes a turn for the worst, one must realize that he/she is the one on the driving seat. Indeed forces of the mind can overthrow forces of fate. Faith keeps those that keep the faith. A lovely poem bristling with knowledge. Thanks for sharing Honey. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Manonton Dalan 01 January 2016

Maganda pagkahabi.......

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