Broken Mask Poem by Adrian Ivashkov

Broken Mask

Rating: 5.0


this mask is breaking
chipping away
you can start to see through
but some still lingers
fighting to conceal
whats left of the mind
but slowly falls to the black
to the depths
to only come back
as the creatures
that tourchers the soul
and rips it to shreds
intill theres nothing left
leaving the body on empty shell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 14 October 2011

Amazing! What a deep and thought provoking write with a rich imagery and fine texture and which clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more such well penned and poignant writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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