Sourly Demented


Broken Thoughts - Poem by Sourly Demented

Sharing different thoughts
different promises
different lies
Words without a meaning
The meaning without sense
At the end we lost ourselves
again
Can't find what its already lost
the memories they always fade
Broken without help
How can truth hurt like a sharp pen?

Walking without feet
Talking without speaking
Running without ease
Broken thoughts; don't tease

Something has ended
New thoughts have entered
Broken they seem to be
Theres is no end to the beginning
They still don't please
My broken thoughts
They never end


Comments about Broken Thoughts by Sourly Demented

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (4/26/2010 9:30:00 PM)

    That was really deep, I could feel the emotion you put into that. I really like the condradictions in there, it gave it greater meaning. Keep writing from the heart, awesome poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 26, 2010



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