Brought To Life... Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Brought To Life...

Rating: 5.0


* life and death are sometimes simultaneous. crossing the boundries between this place and an exquisite existance (even if only realized for a brief moment..) . heightened only by the love shared between one another a moment later... *

MMmmmmmmmm He coo's
Into her ear
Soft 'I love you's'
Bring her near

Her imagery
Locked in his eyes
As mounting passions
Realize

Her breath becomes
A rapid gasp
She screams his name
As muscles Grasp

Pulsing Waves
Of ecstacy
Enslave her to
His mastery

And then...again
No rest between
Her nails dig deep
Where sheets had been

Crumpled on the floor
Now lay
Heaping piles
Symbolic fray

As once again
Her moans release
The present power
Beyind her peace

And with each short
And gasping breath
She's brought to life
Thru a little death.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 29 December 2006

If one needs to suffer a little death to have this..... quick wheres my sword...lol Passionate write my dear!

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Kristin Davis 28 December 2006

LMAO thank you all! You guys are awesome and I love you for it! Sure know a way to bring a smile upon a gal's face.... *chuckling @ ya'll* mwahs n hugs Love~N~Honor, Kris

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Geoff Warden 28 December 2006

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooosh, I Agree Duncan times 1000

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 December 2006

Wooooooooooooosh! Kris...Anyone ever tell you that melting members P.C.'S is an egregious offense? ! WHEW! ! ! ...I gotta go & get a cool cloth...oh, yeah, your comment...errr...WHAT DUNCAN SAID X10! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' FRANKSTER ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Duncan Wyllie 28 December 2006

WOW KRISTIN, no, that's it, WOW says it all Love duncan XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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