Edgar Rendon Eslit

Rookie - 73 Points (August 21,1981 / Iligan City)

Brown’s “i Feel Good “ - Poem by Edgar Rendon Eslit

wake-up in the morning you say
thanks, it’s a brand new day
proceed to the toilet
time to brush your teeth
take a little shower
to revitalize your body better
fit a lighter shirt
weary if it still fits
wow, an aroma of a brewed coffee
ready on the table must be
turning on the DVD
there the jibe is in passion
through the rhythm of the classics
you whistle with the music
the mug is half empty
while your eyes is browsing the story
you’re stuck on the headline of the day
your heart is palpating so heavily
as you compare the tickets excitedly
“you won the 88 million dollar lottery”

Comments about Brown’s “i Feel Good “ by Edgar Rendon Eslit

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/25/2010 12:42:00 AM)

    yup... even by reading the poem i can really sense the words 'I FEEL GOOD'... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 22, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 31, 2011

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