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butterfly, butterfly
fly in the sky
butterfly, butterfly
flies so high
butterfly, butterfly
lands on my thigh
butterfly, butterfly
motionlessly lies
butterfly, butterfly
gracefully dies
Adryan Bates
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Thursday, December 21, 2006 |
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Tuesday, December 14, 2010 |
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Comments about this poem (Butterfly, Butterfly
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William Slaughter (4/15/2011 9:54:00 AM)
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Umm, this is depressing, but a decent poem, Lot of Love'
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Rebecca Bell (8/31/2010 2:28:00 PM)
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It's so simple yet so sad. I really enjoy it.
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Lum Nothing (9/25/2008 4:20:00 PM)
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This poem is really sad, but i love it. I think this should be published.
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Tammara Boyce (9/15/2007 3:01:00 PM)
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nice poem, its short and sweet.tru though.
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Josie Brooks (5/2/2007 2:22:00 PM)
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its just, amazing. its so great. its lovely.
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Philippe Barbeau (4/17/2007 4:16:00 PM)
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kinda nice, nice ideas.
I'm sure your other poems are even better =P
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Alexxisandra Beauxx (3/21/2007 11:16:00 AM)
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i love it.
its so beautiful....
just mesmerizing
you should check out sum of my poems
theyre not quite good as this
but they are still worth reading!
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Kristina Bowman (2/23/2007 7:35:00 PM)
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Adyran I love you! Renee's Party was amazing when you sung that, and the whole satan stuff and u made the balloon deflate.
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