By My Lonesome Poem by Minx Videsben

By My Lonesome



All my life
I have been different
A freak
A weirdo
A loser

And all my life
All I've ever wanted
Was someone like me

Another loser
Another weirdo
Another freak

Sometimes
I find someone
Someone I think,
Could be like me

But every time
Every time
I'm too weird for them
Or they're just as weird
Just not my type of weird

Or it could be a perfect situation
They're my kinda weird
I'm their kinda weird
But they don't like me

It always never works out
Which is why
I will always
Always
Be
Alone

Tuesday, June 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,lonely,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'll forever be alone
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 06 June 2017

Josefina, I like this though it does smack of self-pity, not the most attractive of emotions. Your line breaks and stanzas and plain diction work well. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC

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