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By The Sea Shore

Rating: 4.3


Soft sand
Whispering winds
Sky & Sea
Hand-in-hand.
Salty waft
Mist hangs
Shells galore
Mysteries untold
Seaside allure
Leaves me
Wanting for more…

(20 April,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

YOU GOT ME MUSIN' 'BOUT MY SUMMERS, IN CAPE MAY, NEW JERSEY...YOUR POEM MAKES ME WONDER IF YOU'VE BEEN THERE, YOURSELF! NICE WRITE...TEN ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2006

A brief and nice description of the Sea shore in 15 or 16 words.

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Catastrophe King 09 August 2006

Your style is unmatchable.... The ocean and its elements always had some romance in them and you have captured every bit of it. A 10 it shall be... try getting this into music too?

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Pia Andersson 24 July 2006

Yes I agree with Duncan - a beautiful poem...by the sea is a wonderful place to be..a good place to think and feel and write for that matter..With love Pia

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Duncan Wyllie 25 May 2006

Applaud! this is beautiful, what a great voice you have in this one 10! from me Love Duncan X

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Esther Leclerc 21 May 2006

A poem that can only be written and appreciated by those in love with the sea. Thank you for this quiet beauty...

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