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10.0
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Of all the words unspoken,
Not saying 'I love you, ' hurts the most.
Common, tell me how you really feel!
I can take it!
Lets go babe, say it to my face!
Do you have hate in your eyes?
Sorry how would I know
when you don't look at me.
And why don't you?
Is it because I found out about her?
Mama always tought me to share,
I didn't think that meant my heart.
No honey!
Not this time!
I'm not letting you win,
just so my heart can be broken again.
Common, lets go!
I use to love you,
But now,
gosh do I love to piss you off.
Because imagine my surprise,
When I look to see your lips on another.
Oh, I'm sorry
Did I hurt you?
Ok, lets sit down and talk,
I think I should go first,
Baby....Honey....
We're through.
Aww, don't look so sad babe, you knew this was comin.
But look on the bright side,
Now you can go home to someone who, I guess,
loves you better than I did.
What can I say?
you were just another guy,
and I'm over you.
You broke my heart so i'm dumping you.
Now excuse me while I go get ready,
I found someone too,
And I don't want to be late for our date.
........Bye Baby........=)
Jessica Elizondo
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Comments about this poem (Bye Baby........=)
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Jessica Elizondo
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Desiree Burdick (12/28/2008 5:37:00 PM)
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lol good poem i wish i could say the 2nd 2 last line
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Amy (9/21/2008 4:48:00 PM)
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wow- thats well cool poem! hope you do find the one-
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Sarwar Chowdhury (7/15/2008 3:11:00 PM)
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Yes I enjoyed it. Heartiest composition!
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Clarissa Tobey (7/10/2008 1:26:00 PM)
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wow i hope that guy read this!
well written it shows how much you cared.
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palas kumar ray (7/9/2008 2:36:00 PM)
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thoughts from heart is pored in a poem undiluted,
Pain and anguish comes out of pen & through a challenge to the seemingly
forgotten beloved mate.
(carefully I write 'mate' & omit writing FRIEND)
*10*
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Jesse Turner (7/7/2008 10:34:00 PM)
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I can imagine this whole thing playing out before my eyes. It isn't very pretty. The scene that I am imagining I mean. The poem is great. Just to clarify. Wow. Am I rambling on? Maybe I should stop. :) Good poem all the way.
Jesse
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**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man (7/7/2008 9:18:00 PM)
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Very good ending Jess, way to show him who lost out, I would'nt want it to happen
to me, , but i like it.i give it a 10..
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Serenity Prayer (7/7/2008 3:10:00 PM)
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oooo burn, baby burn! ! lol. i love it. its so funny. its so you too. i can totally see you saying that. high five girl. lol. great job. love it. way funny. =)
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