In The Box, Under My Bed Poem by Jessica Elizondo

In The Box, Under My Bed



Am I crazy?
Or crazy in love?
Your so flawless,
So perfect through my eyes.

When you look me in the eyes,
I blush and turn around.
Your eyes are too beautiful for my eyes to gaze at
And your smile makes me melt.

Your hugs are so warm
I feel safe in your arms.
But sadly to you,
they're just friendly hugs, nothing more.

Oh my dear how I wish you knew.
You have me so in love
I only ask one thing,
to know the truth......do you love me too?

Well will you ever know?
My love, in the box under my bed
is a letter that I don't know will get read,
But one day I swear that your beautiful eyes will look apon it

I know we're friends,
But can't we be something more?
Your the only guy, that I can be myself around,
The one that I love.

So on that faithful day,
when I open the box, and take out the letter,
I hope you will read it with care.
Because not only does the letter have my feelings on it, it has my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Let me know the out come...=].....very lovetastic

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Serenity Prayer 25 June 2008

aww its so sweet. i love the last line. very well done. excellent! !

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Zachary Glitch 17 December 2009

Aaaaaaaahhhhhh... The feeling of longing love. How I know it all too well. Very wonderfully said, and you capture the feeling as if it were a prisoner of war. I give it a 10.

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Arabian Heart 16 September 2008

A boxed heart that is new to me I wonder if the box is enough to protect keep it close to your heart always. such a sweet thing my heart feels from you

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wow! ! ! ! that line i put in my poem, you lead the most distinguished poet is a understaitment......i love this poem....10/10

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Bianca J. Walker 25 June 2008

A very sincere and enchanting poem.

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Evaughn Gray 25 June 2008

wow that's good..nice feelings u let out.~Hazel

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