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Indira Renganathan
(5/31/2009 5:19:00 AM) |
A dilemma of a delicate flower well portrayed....nice write
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Catrina Heart
(4/19/2009 6:03:00 AM) |
beautiful piece, a significant write.......
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One More Try
(8/19/2008 8:54:00 AM) |
i remember when you wrote this poem. i liked it then too. great poem. very short and simple yet its deep if you look into it.
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Bonnie Collins
(8/18/2008 3:18:00 PM) |
Beautifully written with much perplexing decions in life as it can be at times. Your tender side is showing in this write.. Life can be complicated at times even when you are older....... Very short and sweet....
Bonnie
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Ency Bearis
(8/18/2008 6:13:00 AM) |
should i stay or should i go....
so let me know...
beautiful flower i can't let you go...
as you're sweet i cannot do...
nice concept of the flower isn't it?
Ency Bearis
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C T Heart
(8/17/2008 11:44:00 PM) |
nice flow of words...........loved your beautiful piece.
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