Can'T Beat Much Longer Without You Poem by Lu Vernezze

Can'T Beat Much Longer Without You

Rating: 3.5


I'm feeling drowsy and i can't speak
My life is lousy and my heart is weak
I need to get away from this crazy street

Oh yeah and my heart can't beat much longer
Without you

I’m feeling drowsy and I’m really down
My life is lousy when you’re not around
I need to get out of this crazy town

Oh yeah, and my heart can’t beat much longer
Without you

When you called me the other night
And you asked me if I was alrite
I was fighting back the tears
But I hoped you would not notice.

It’s cos i’m missing you right now
But I knew I would somehow

Oh yeah and my heart can’t beat much longer
Without you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 25 September 2006

Hi Lucy, in it's simplicity this is beautiful. I think you could make this into a song. You don't need to say anything more I can sense what you're saying here.... it sings out from the page. Great write - Humber Girl: -)

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Original Unknown Girl 25 September 2006

Hi Lucy, in it's simplicity this is beautiful. I think you could make this into a song. You don't need to say anything more I can sense what you're saying here.... it sings out from the page. Great write - Humber Girl: -)

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