Can'T Let You Go...... Poem by michelle al G

Can'T Let You Go......



You are deep,
i can't sleep,
Why is that? ! ,
is it your hat,
Oh wait! ,
it is your beautiful eyes,
that makes me maze,
I am in a map,
While you are standing on a mat,
driving the car,

with a bar,
It is 'you'! ,
singing a song,
It is a tag,
for me,
to come 'back',
with a sack,
of flowers,
oh what a wonderful flowers? ,
But for whom! , he said,
It is for you, i said
You are my shining sun,
and i am in the fun.!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A cheerful poem. Good expression! Loved it; D

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Gregory Pierre-jerome 03 June 2010

read cannot let go on my list.....i think we share same views...this is better than mine thoug h.great write

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Kee Thampi 03 February 2010

very lovely this poetess writes from heart it is your beautiful eyes, that makes me maze, I am in a map, While you are standing on a mat, driving the car, with a bar, It is 'you'! , singing a song, It is a tag,

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 February 2010

wow... so good... i see poetry and poetic lines!

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