(11.06.1960 / Philippines Manila)

What do you think this poem is about?

candle flame

candle flame

sun has been shining through
the window screens today
warming our souls and bodies
counting this day as a new gift
thanking life for this blessing
measuring this passing day
with some gentle smiles
angel wings will fly them over
To lighten up at your place
a hazy blue candle flame flickering
through the thickening night!

(Switzerland)

Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2008


Comments about this poem (candle flame by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel )

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/1/2008 3:38:00 PM)

    Oh I felt the magic of this one.........this really places you in a world of smiles.

    perfect '10'


    best wishes
    Jon

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  • Prasanna Kumari (4/29/2008 9:44:00 AM)

    i feel a gentle breeze on my body while going through your poem....so soothing...beautiful poem...

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  • marvin brato (4/21/2008 11:04:00 PM)

    I agree with RIC, such is full of hope and inspiration. A 10.

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  • Raj Nandy (4/15/2008 10:41:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem Mencita. The candel for me is a symbol of divinity!
    -RAJ NANDY

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