douglas scotney

Gold Star - 9,073 Points (boomer / Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide)

Careful Man - Poem by douglas scotney

I am a careful man,
knows there's plenty in the least,
danger in the feast,
wants to start again,
not add to the feastly mess
already hi-liting
what trouble we're in.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

after nephew Jordan's first CD (see, Jordan Scotney, You Tube)
+ Upanishad + Brian Cox

Comments about Careful Man by douglas scotney

  • Gold Star - 10,109 Points Heather Wilkins (7/2/2013 6:23:00 PM)

    a smart man is a careful man. nice write (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (6/28/2013 5:32:00 AM)

    Less is more, mores molest the more you have, the less you desire to longing. Thought provoking. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 46,310 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/27/2013 8:11:00 PM)

    careful man, I like it, thanks.
    I invite you to read my new poems. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 28, 2013


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