Mamta Agarwal

Rookie (March 27,1951 / India)

#Cause and Effect- Haiku


High pollution
Kids wheeze and city coughs-
Mind full of smog

Submitted: Thursday, November 13, 2008

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/14/2008 2:01:00 AM)

    Pollution's effect on nostrils and lungs is apparent but it's effect on human mind is occult and very harmful and so on heart as well...! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lauren R (11/13/2008 11:28:00 PM)

    tying the mind to the lungs to the kids...the lifesources of the human world.
    very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie premji premji (11/13/2008 10:42:00 PM)

    SMOG is an engineering term which we use frequently in Automobile Engg.
    (smoke+ fog) ... lovely haiku and i appreciate your concern for young lungs
    and nature.

    oil is the blood of earth and
    we have already punctured
    her heart!
    her lungs: the amazon forest is
    almost felled down...
    gone...sure nature will fight back
    with epidemics, natural calamities..
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points marvin brato (11/13/2008 10:41:00 PM)

    M-ainly though provoking
    a profound observation
    m-any did not mind
    t-hat there is death in the air
    a-t everywhere!

    a 10 (Report) Reply

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