Chain Of Promise Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Chain Of Promise

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Nothing was new when flowers were blooming
In your garden my flute-string was alive
Moss on the sitting bench grown up with hugs
First kiss was before the child spring cuckoo
Fragrant lips seized my inner heart worldly
Thunder, light without black clouds in our words
There was petals book of raining promise
Stainless valley of love with not written
Before the Lord Shiva now coming up
Scythe of the time in rusted desert grove
Raindrops in sun-dews rub wordless letter
It's chain where you are new afar from me
Chain of promise where child twinkle like stars
Shield; I can't defeat the cycle of eyes


30.06.2020 Chattogram

Thursday, July 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Chain of promises woven around nature, man and the connecting link of love. May the stars always shine through your eyes. Thank you Mahtab....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 July 2020

First love! First kiss! ! Musing along with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aarzoo Mehek 02 July 2020

Memories of first love n first and rain of promises engulfing your thoughts. Its priceless moments

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Indira Renganathan 13 July 2020

'Raindrops in sun-dews rub wordless letter It's chain where you are new afar from me Chain of promise where child twinkle like stars Shield; I can't defeat the cycle of eyes'...... A clever write with in-depth meaning.....very descriptive too 10++

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 July 2020

Moss on the sitting bench grown up with hugs First kiss was before the child spring cuckoo Fragrant lips seized my inner heart worldly Thunder, light without black clouds in our words There was petals book of raining promise.. very poetic my dear Mahtab. love it. tony

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Anjandev Roy 05 July 2020

Excellent piece indeed......thank u. anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 02 July 2020

I can't defeat the cycle of eyes....to all the chain of promises. Beautiful muse. Appreciations.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 July 2020

GLAD THOUGH LATE ur mb f bd be comming romantic b @it

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