Chess Figures Poem by Amar Cuturic

Chess Figures

Rating: 5.0


I open the chest in which chess pieces are held
Countless combinations flash through my mind
But they all lead to the same conclusion, I've lost, my king has fallen.

Thursday, June 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,life,misery,realisation,chess,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 30 June 2017

Dont worry, chess can be restarted when its over, just like your day...you done yesterday, today you can restart new

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Chinedu Dike 29 June 2017

Insightful utterances set aside for honest reflection. A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing Amar.

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 June 2017

A good start with a unique poem. Thanks

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Amar Cuturic 29 June 2017

Thank you Jazib

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2017

the same conclusion, I've lost, my king has fallen. a great symbolic poem. but life is more than that...... we have to ourselves up from depression and jump in joy come what may, . with determination fight against all ods and become great....... you can.. thank you. dear poet. tony

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Amar Cuturic 29 June 2017

Thanks, I fully agree! Also, I've read some of your poems, they remind me of the sufi ones, search for the poem: When I die by Rumi, I think u will like it :)

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