Sherbanu Molu

Rookie (1st March 1996 / Mombasa, Kenya)

Chocolate Cake - Poem by Sherbanu Molu

Chocolate cake,
Peacefully baked,
Chocolate dripping down from the cake,
Oh! My life at stake,
Some flakes sprinkled on the top,
When the knife went chop chop,
A big cherry placed on the centre,
Red in color,
Cream everywhere,
Something you can never compare,
Freshly baked chocolate cake,
Is sold without a brake,
Early in the morning,
Business is boosting,
When chocolate cake,
Is peacefully baked...


Comments about Chocolate Cake by Sherbanu Molu

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (12/30/2009 4:13:00 PM)

    Sounds yummy to me...
    the poem taste fine
    thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (12/29/2009 12:30:00 PM)

    peacefully is strange for a cake being baked you may want to change it with another adverb...but it's a wonderful poem made me hungry though i have just finished eating! i found the rhyme musical here...great job keep writing and give me a piece of your cake! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (12/29/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    Yummy Yummy…wow...you’ll enjoy alone?
    1st bite for me dear…LOL!
    10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 28, 2009



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