I PuT ThIs LoVe In A CirCLe
So ThAt IT WiLL Go On FoREvEr
I CaN'T KeEp It In My HeArT
bEaCuSe My HeArT CaN Be BrOkEn
So To MaKe SuRe ItS SaFe
AnD NeVEr GoNe
I KEeP It In ThIs CIrCLe
So thAt It WiLL AlWaYs COmE BaCk
AnD ALwAys Be HeRe
EvEn ThOuGh My HeArt GeTs BrOkEn
Within a circle sound a little caged in and unable to be free. a good write and I like the gwerky print well done Dave T
So far it is not an eccentric circle it is alright..brave attempt
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like the line that said ' i put this love in a circle so that it will go on forever. i cant keep it in my heart becasue my heart might get broken.' well done. one of the best poems youve written. great job