Bob Blackwell

Rookie - 0 Points (29/5/1936 / Wales)

Clouds


At home the clouds have no
bottoms cut off by magic knife,
they are soft, fluffy, white and
like me have shades of grey.

Happy clouds, quiet clouds,
relaxed, not moving clouds.
Bathed in sunshine, they are
clouds I want to see.

Glad to be here clouds.
Altogether nice clouds
No place like home clouds.
Clouds I want to stay.

Submitted: Saturday, February 24, 2007
Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011

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  • Rookie Raj Nandy (9/7/2009 3:26:00 AM)

    BOB, Beautiful thoughts! Clouds are ghost-like insubstantial beings! More transient than human beings! Changes its shapes and forms - towing a child's dream! But when suddenly they decide to join hands and unite, they drench us with showers, - the very elixir of life! 10!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (5/26/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    A write as lovely as the Fluffy white clouds themselves. Today hovering over the ocean like soliers in rows, gray centres with white linings...serene....awesome (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Saeid Hadavand (4/26/2009 11:21:00 PM)

    Happy clouds, quiet clouds,
    relaxed, not moving clouds.

    Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (1/4/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    I love the pictures that the clouds create even on a gray and lowering day.
    Praise for your eloquent pen.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patricia Gale (2/25/2007 7:40:00 AM)

    Splendid flow Bob, I could imagine the clouds..... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,237 Points David Harris (2/24/2007 2:16:00 PM)

    Bob, lovely fluffy white clouds. Beautifully written and lovely flow. I did like this one. Nice and easy. Another great write. Thanks for sharing it.
    David (Report) Reply

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