She wraps me in her icy flow
and chills me 'til I'm warm
Soothes away the open space
With sand and pebbled shores
She tries to lull me downriver
Gently pulling, drowsing
Massaging the miles off me
Relaxing
I know she lies
I know she'd take me to the big river
Carrying me like an eddying breeze
But I want to lay back and dream
And slowly drift away
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Chills me til I'm warm ' is a poetic inspiration Jim - - and the piece evokes an adventure in which with the river personified gives the reader a whole new sense of what a dip in a minor river could result in - - a fine contribution Jim....10 from Fay.