Colors Poem by Mussia M Bronstein

Colors

Rating: 5.0


Red is for blood
That can rush between
The blue green veins
And raises the streaming
Hot air through our noses
And ears, leaving the
Face bright pink.

The blue
Sea touch the
Brown tiny pieces
Of little balls and
Soft feeling sand,
That is peacefully
Laying on the
Uneven wet salty
ground as the blueish
Green water that was laying on it.

Yellow blanket
To curled under
With rainbow
Colors that over
Lap the soft
Baby pink pillow
Under your pale
Face leaving red
Mark on your
tan cheeks.

As thick puffed
Shapes of the
White and grey
Clouds slowly
Moves cracefully
On it's moving
Earth of brown,
Green, and blue.


Purple pencil to write
On the white paper,
Making the black
Strings that you drew
On black and white
Cardboard.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 14 August 2012

You have made a great start in writing poetry. To learn the many forms that poetry can take you should read as much of the great masters as you can. I wish you wonderful success. Read mine - The Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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