Come Closer Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Come Closer

Rating: 5.0


Are you an illusion of my delusion?
I seem to feel you from another time!
I seem to have had you in my mind.
And here you appear as clear to me.
Leaving me to wonder if this could be...
What I sought I could not touch in my dreams!
Is this real?
Is this reality?
When you look at 'me'
Do I appear to you as you appear to me?
Are you an illusion of my delusion?
Come closer...
Make me believe!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 29 September 2006

One of your recent bests, Lawrence. Real or a delusion? It leaves the reader to wonder which one, too..... Love, Fran xx

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Brian Dorn 29 September 2006

'Are you an illusion of my delusion? ' Awesome line, Lawrence, and a great poem! Brian

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Tiyler Durden 29 September 2006

ANOTHER great poem frm the master! ! Keep going man your on a roll,10 for tiyler

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Diane Violet 29 September 2006

Good question, I hope you get the answer you want. All the best, Diane

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