Treasure Island

Khairul Ahsan


Come Home Darling


It's been long since you've gone.
Though we chat, regularly somewhat,
See you on Skype, every night,
Yet that's not enough, seems tough,
To live without you. It's nothing new!

The night before you left, we hardly slept,
Heightened emotions, kept us in motion.
Intense desires kept us afire, oh my dear,
What a climax of ecstacy was there!
The fury of love roared everywhere.

Now my body aches with pent up desire,
Like a volcano ready to erupt anywhere.
Loads of unspent love and desire
Await your arrival to feel and share.
Please come with the preparation you require!

Come home, darling, I can no longer bear,
The memory of that night, our bodies bare,
Fulfilled, inch by inch, with nothing to spare.
The thought kindles the physical desire,
Aches and spasms are caused by the flare.

Dhaka
05 July 2013

Submitted: Friday, July 05, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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  • Khairul Ahsan (5/23/2014 10:46:00 PM)

    @Ruma Chaudhuri
    I am also touched by your generous comment on my poem.
    Thanks for understanding, thanks for appreciating.
    Much inspired, much obliged,
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (5/23/2014 10:33:00 PM)

    @Evelina Kononenko ~
    Thanks for appreciating the emotion in the poem. I am much inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Ruma Chaudhuri (5/20/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    Its very much emotional poem. Touchy as well as nice poem. I really like the poem. It can touch anybody's heart easily. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (4/8/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    @Amitava Sur
    Thanks for understanding and appreciating the 'Intense longing of love' in the poem. I am glad and inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (2/14/2014 5:42:00 AM)

    Intense longing of love and lust was expressed here with vivid details.... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (11/23/2013 10:18:00 AM)

    @ Beauteous Victory,
    Thank you very much for your nice words.
    Such nice words of appreciation fills my heart with joy. Thanks for giving me the much needed joy! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (11/14/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    @ Naida Nepascua Supnet,
    Thanks for agreeing to the emotions expressed in the poem. Physical presence cannot be replaced by the virtual ones. (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/21/2013 6:02:00 PM)

    You talk of many couples afar but still making it through. Constant talking is not enough, never be enough. It will not suffice the presence needed.
    Ah, as always, very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 10:30:00 PM)

    @Samantha,
    Yes, it is passionate. The poem was written with the feelings of separation when my love was on a tour of duty, away from home, for not too long (yet it was unbearable) .
    Thanks for sharing your sad feelings with me. It makes me feel I was able to communicate. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 10:24:00 PM)

    @Sandra Feldman,
    Yes, the fire of desire, to be with your love and to make love is overwhelming, all engulfing.
    I cannot thank you enough for your second line. (Report) Reply

  • Samanthia Moore (8/9/2013 2:13:00 PM)

    Soooo im sitting here in tears this made me sad. This is what happens when i read something emotional. This really got to me but i will be ok. But it is a fantastic poem. Love it. Its so passionate. (Report) Reply

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