Come With Me Poem by Adam Day

Come With Me

Rating: 5.0


Blinked and stunned
By your radiant essence
Filled by a dark room
Candescent presents

Spirits high again
With your magic ways
Feels like a spell on me
Walking around in a daze

Warm subtle chills
Zing through my spine
Like Wine so robust
You have me lost in time

Come with me now
As we walk with grace
Hand in hand as we
We leave this place

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 14 October 2008

Your first stanza opens the poem very well, and the appeal stays all the way. Good flow and metre. from Fay.

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Adam Day

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whiting Indiana
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