Aldo Kraas

Rookie (July 15 1964 / Sao Paulo Brazil)

COMETS OF KANDAHAR


Comets of Khandahar I saw in the sky
While I was setting up my tent for the night
And It felt almost like being inside of a painting that was painted by God at Night and me also being a part of that paint was cool
After I sat my tent for the night I prepared something to eat
And at the next morning I was fighting in this Kandahar war
But also the Americans had lost 3 soldiers and we lost none yet
But we keep our fingers crossed each day now that we don't lose any

Submitted: Sunday, March 13, 2011
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