maria sudibyo

Veteran Poet - 1,847 Points (280883 / parist van java)

Coming-Age Dawn - Poem by maria sudibyo

Build then destroy it
Paint then smear it
Fold then tear it
Love then break it
Nurse then neglect it
Cure then poison it
Save then spill it
Give then steal it
Sharpen then fade it
Raise then curse it
Don’t make it half-heart
Get finish what's clouded
And after that
What would left in me?

Comments about Coming-Age Dawn by maria sudibyo

  • Rookie - 477 Points Timothy Caffery (1/22/2010 10:19:00 PM)

    I like the style. It reads to me sorta fast, I like that too. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 22, 2010

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