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On tears lonely lonely cry

On tears lonely lonely cry
You always shade on my mind
Even you had flied away
Left me alone in the night

On tears lonely lonely cry
No one can take that place
My first love you have to know
You’ve never gone in my heart

Oh why, oh why
I can’t forget your kiss goodbye
I want crying to you
Bring this pain from my life

On tears lonely lonely cry
My first love you have to know
The memory was closed
In my broken lonely heart

Submitted: Thursday, November 01, 2007
Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011

Comments about this poem (On tears lonely lonely cry by maria sudibyo )

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  • Stefan Van Pinxteren (11/17/2008 5:11:00 PM)

    Very good poem it touched me deep. I like the last part the most really. Beautifull.

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  • Prasetya Utama (10/14/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    Look like from the story of real life of poet.Beautiful.

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  • Egi David Perdana (4/28/2008 12:32:00 AM)

    wow puisi yang indah sekali, saya rasa ini salah satu puisi terbaik yang pernah saya baca mengena dihati dan tidak muluk-muluk, saya beri nilai 10, mohon komentari juga puisi saya yang berjudul a must for love, makasih

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  • Angela Delgado (1/24/2008 1:24:00 PM)

    thats a good poem...keep up the good work

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  • Ayesha Rahman (1/11/2008 7:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful....u jus put the whole story in this poem very beautiful specially the last stanza.....

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