maria sudibyo

Veteran Poet - 1,673 Points (280883 / parist van java)

On Tears Lonely Lonely Cry - Poem by maria sudibyo

On tears lonely lonely cry
You always shade on my mind
Even you had flied away
Left me alone in the night

On tears lonely lonely cry
No one can take that place
My first love you have to know
You’ve never gone in my heart

Oh why, oh why
I can’t forget your kiss goodbye
I want crying to you
Bring this pain from my life

On tears lonely lonely cry
My first love you have to know
The memory was closed
In my broken lonely heart


Comments about On Tears Lonely Lonely Cry by maria sudibyo

  • Rookie Stefan Van Pinxteren (11/17/2008 5:11:00 PM)

    Very good poem it touched me deep. I like the last part the most really. Beautifull. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Prasetya Utama (10/14/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    Look like from the story of real life of poet.Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Egi David Perdana (4/28/2008 12:32:00 AM)

    wow puisi yang indah sekali, saya rasa ini salah satu puisi terbaik yang pernah saya baca mengena dihati dan tidak muluk-muluk, saya beri nilai 10, mohon komentari juga puisi saya yang berjudul a must for love, makasih (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Angela Delgado (1/24/2008 1:24:00 PM)

    thats a good poem...keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ayesha Rahman (1/11/2008 7:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful....u jus put the whole story in this poem very beautiful specially the last stanza..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011


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