Treasure Island

sukkum chang


Commingle of seasons and love


As i ventured back to love,
A new dawn and a whole new world through my eyes seen,
I felt the tranquil beauty of nature,
I 'am in love again,
Nature seems to show likeness,
The passerine birds sings in joy,
Daffodils and lilies bloomers, dazzled and waved,
The sun shone her warmth on me,
Its spring time,
I ventured to explore the beauty of nature,
The sun rosed up and fell again,
The birds sang and was silent,
The world sleeps,
The stars displayed glitterness,
The winds blew strong and disappeared,
The moon's always wane,
The greeness tends to fade,
The leaves feel off the trees,
I ventured through all these in love with her and nature,
Everywhere i look around is white,
The sun's shinning weak,
Its all white and cold in here,
Spring's gone, summer's gone, autumn's gone,
Winter is here to stay,
Silence, quietness and a gentle breeze,
In the cold light of the day i am,
The ponds freezes and solidifies,
Love sings wintry songs,
With a cold shoulder she tapped goodbye,
I breath the dewy air,
As dewdrops fell on me,
I am frosty, benumbed,
The air in me wreak coldness,
And so is the moment without her,
As i stand alone,
Flowers died, birds don't nests,
The living are indoors,
I am the only one outside,
Lost in wilderness,
In the fields of cold winter,
Mourning the love lost.

Submitted: Saturday, September 03, 2011
Edited: Monday, November 05, 2012

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  • Yash Shinde (10/27/2012 3:43:00 AM)

    really wonderful..great imagery.......loved this one....lovely romantic well written liked it :) (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/6/2011 2:55:00 AM)

    the sun rosed up and fell again,
    the birds sang and was silent,
    the world sleeps,
    the stars displayed glitterness,
    the winds blew strong and disappeared,
    the moon's always wane,
    the greeness tends to fade,
    the leaves feel off the trees,

    I have not seen Nagaland people great lover of Nature since they are worldly veterans of 2nd World War Battle of Kohima.The love of motherland was also imminent is evident from ur poetry..well done (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/6/2011 2:55:00 AM)

    the sun rosed up and fell again,
    the birds sang and was silent,
    the world sleeps,
    the stars displayed glitterness,
    the winds blew strong and disappeared,
    the moon's always wane,
    the greeness tends to fade,
    the leaves feel off the trees,

    I have not seen Nagaland people great lover of Nature since they are worldly veterans of 2nd World War Battle of Kohima.The love of motherland was also imminent is evident from ur poetry..well done (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (9/4/2011 8:12:00 PM)

    A very sad but impressive, romantic and well penned write! It sounds pretty much like a poem I wrote titled: A LOST LOVE! This type of experience is the kind that stays within our hearts and minds for long time! A very heart touching write! I like it! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your thought provoking writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ... (Report) Reply

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