Treasure Island

Justin Sanchez


Commitment


I've known you for years and years
And you've brought me nothing but cheer

The times we had were all so fun
Bad times? There were none

Together, we were so full of joy
Just being ourselves, you were never coy

I fell in love with you, the girl i call my best friend
I was scared to tell you, thinking our friendship would come to an end

I was surprised to find out that you returned the same feelings
We came together and i wondered what the future would bring

Which brings us back to present day
Where i have something important to say

I'm going to do my best to be true
And be real when i say i love you

So, I'll pull out a box and get down on one knee
And ask you, with all my love and a ring, 'Will you marry me? '

Submitted: Wednesday, May 22, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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