Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 420 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'Complete Eden! ' - Poem by Shania K. Younce

A tear drop came last.
A last tear dropped from Eden.
Eden dropped a tear.

A tear drop came last.
A last tear dropped from Eden.
Eden drops a tear.

Eden dropped a tear.
A last tear dropped from Eden.
A tear drop came last.

Eden drops a tear.
A last tear dropped from Eden.
A tear drop came last.

A tear drop came last.
A last tear drops from Eden.
Eden dropped a tear.

A tear drop came last.
A last tear drops from Eden.
Eden drops a tear.

Eden dropped a tear.
A last tear drops from Eden.
A tear drop came last.

Eden drops a tear.
A last tear drops from Eden.
A tear drop came last.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I did this in my fourth period English class. Please comment at will and with honesty!

Comments about 'Complete Eden! ' by Shania K. Younce

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (7/13/2014 12:33:00 PM)

    I agree with Ed Nigma this is a different style of writing. but clever. I like it after I caught on to it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 3, 2014



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